Soul
Unique and immaterial being
Be you.
Instinct
Innate pattern of animal behaviour
Feel you.
Curiosity
Ravenous hunger to know more
Feed you.
Quiet
Discreet calm and absence of noise
Hear you.
Respect
Deeply inhaled admiration
Breathe you.
Love
Sincerely placed tenderness and affection for one
All of this
For you.
~Alisa Hutton
Your love poetry is wonderful
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Thank you:)
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Hi Alisa you know me as Cake(Alex isn’t my real name either) but I have been advised to have a proper name and a proper address so to become a published author. Hmmm we will see. Anyway I haven’t posted anything on my other site. I will catch up with your marvellous poetry shortly.
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I shall call you Cake for now then because really you have always been Cake to me:) I look forward to the new site AND buying some published work! *no pressure*
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i am feeling the pressure already…I shall still be posting on cakeordeath at the same time as the new site. Thanks for the encouragement.
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You really are such a great writer. Just be yourself and enjoy xo.
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Thank you so much that is a high compliment coming from you. I really appreciate.
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I absolutely love this and they way it’s constructed is amazing! Well done, Alisa! π
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Thanks, Eric:) I played around with the structure for a bit. Different for me but was fun to write.
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It feels very unique. I think you’ve accomplished something brilliant here with it! π
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Thank you. That is a huge compliment xo.
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This is awesome! Love love love this. Really love what you did there. All of those subjects are so important, and yet, so overlooked by so many. And you the way you said so much, with so little, makes it even more powerful.
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Thanks, Zy:) This was a fun one to write for me! Bit of a different writing and thinking process.
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You’re welcome Alisa! Sure seemed like it. I like things like that, you know, different things that can add value and yet ‘spice’ things up in peoples life. Never seen a ‘structure’ like that. Very snazzy π How you say/write something is definitely as important as what one says/writes. BECAUSE IF I’M WRITING YOU LIKE THIS I COULD BE SAYING POSITIVE THINGS AND IT COULD BE AWESOME POETRY BUT IT SEEMS LIKE I’M SCREAMING YOU KNOW LOL. Just kidding. But seriously!
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Lol well put. I had to laugh reading that as my Dad insist on sending emails in all caps because he can see it better. We have tried to explain to him that when people read it they will think he is screaming haha. His response was that he usually is lol.
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That’s great lol. Not something I would have expected π
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you β€
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Very welcome!
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